Concise writing warm-up:
1) In terms of the size of its land, Canada is the second-largest country in the world.
2) As anyone can see, most people have been affected by television in such a way that their appreciation of live theater has obviously become less and less.
Television made most people to appreciate live theater less.
As most people have been affected by television their appreciation of live theater has obviously become less.
People's appreciation of live theater reduces due to tv.
TV reduced most people's appreciation of live theater.
not yet
Most people are affected by tv in a way that their appreciation of live theater has become less.
TV made live theater less popular.
3) It has been shown that the length of the common cold can be reduced by giving the person with the cold doses of zinc glutonate in the form of lozenges.
4) In the time in which we live, people just can hardly be independed any longer. Look what is happening to them in the field of education. They cannot think for themselves. This is also true in other areas of life.
Today in many areas of live it is hard to be independent. For example, students cannot think for themselves.
People are interdependent in many areas of life including the education field.
Now people are dependent.
Nowadays people are not independent enough to think for themselves.
People are dependent. Not only can they not think for themselves but also true in life (?).
These days people cannot live alone.
People are less independent these days.
Today people cannot be independent. In education students can't think for themselves.
5) Food, shelter, and fire will be needed by everyone on the island. Therefore, I will search over and over the island until I find the materials that are needed to build or make these three necessary items.
- Peer editing
Writing practice for precision and detail
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